FRONT COVER – LEVEL 2
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Photo idea – great styling
Colour
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Not sure title works
The bar code won’t actually work
I wouldn't bother splitting her face, make up alone is enough to make her interesting – half a face
Date and issue fonts are odd. Sort that out
‘maybe’ bands at the bottom if you go with just one photo – if you only have half a fce you’ll have space to include some
CONTENTS –LEVEL 1
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Attempt at house style
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Too busy yet paradoxically not enough happening
Too little in your magazine
Lack of images
Caption
No page no/branding evident
Text too big – caps off?
Poor choice of font
Very short magazine (52 pages)
Lacking style
Even a contents should follow a rough layout style
DPS – Level 1
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NEED TO SEE IT!
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