Saturday 8 March 2014

Teacher Feedback - DRAFT

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FRONT COVER – LEVEL 2 

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Photo idea – great styling
Colour 

EBI
Not sure title works
The bar code won’t actually work
I wouldn't bother splitting her face, make up alone is enough to make her interesting – half a face
Date and issue fonts are odd. Sort that out
‘maybe’ bands at the bottom if you go with just one photo – if you only have half a fce you’ll have space to include some

CONTENTS –LEVEL 1 

WWW
Attempt at house style

EBI
Too busy yet paradoxically not enough happening
Too little in your magazine
Lack of images
Caption
No page no/branding evident
Text too big – caps off?
Poor choice of font
Very short magazine (52 pages)
Lacking style
Even a contents should follow a rough layout style

DPS – Level 1

WWW

EBI
NEED TO SEE IT!

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