I have chosen these video's as they inspire me, and have some great graphical ideas that I could use for my magazine. Also, the indie aspects give me an idea of what is already popular within indie culture and it's followers.
Cam you need to comment on why you've posted these videos - inspiration for style?
Overall Cam you have so far demonstrated some good research. However, the actual planning of your c/w needs to be far more in depth. All research posts need to have some reflection on how they could/couldn't be used in your own c/w and why. You still have a lot of work outstanding so at present you would be looking at quite a low mark for R&P. To sort this out you must do the following: * Upload your prelim school mag and contents plus a description of the task and your skill progression. * Upload the remaking of the front cover task you did first. * Analysis of 3 f/c, contents, dps - v disappointing that you have only loaded the texts and not the analysis - this will be worth a large chunk of your R&P marks. * Pitch * UK Tribes research * Institution research - you have researched I-D but haven't linked this to your c/w's institution. *Analysis of other mag titles - this needs to be linked to the post you have created on titles. Please see your posts for further comments/advice I have given.
Cam you need to comment on why you've posted these videos - inspiration for style?
ReplyDeleteOverall Cam you have so far demonstrated some good research. However, the actual planning of your c/w needs to be far more in depth. All research posts need to have some reflection on how they could/couldn't be used in your own c/w and why. You still have a lot of work outstanding so at present you would be looking at quite a low mark for R&P. To sort this out you must do the following:
* Upload your prelim school mag and contents plus a description of the task and your skill progression.
* Upload the remaking of the front cover task you did first.
* Analysis of 3 f/c, contents, dps - v disappointing that you have only loaded the texts and not the analysis - this will be worth a large chunk of your R&P marks.
* Pitch
* UK Tribes research
* Institution research - you have researched I-D but haven't linked this to your c/w's institution.
*Analysis of other mag titles - this needs to be linked to the post you have created on titles.
Please see your posts for further comments/advice I have given.